Wednesday, March 3, 2021

Source Paper Thesis Statement Assignment

 Please post your thesis statement for your final Source Project in the space provided below, make sure to include your name. 

Please review the following weeks lessons, powerpoint and class notes on what constitutes a complete thesis. 

Incomplete sentences , questions or more than one thesis will not be accepted for credit. 

Finally , please comment ( using the proper tools you have learned for workshopping etiquette, on at least 2 student posts, one that you think is brilliant( or at least interested in ) and another that you think could push there topic in a new direction. 

50 comments:

  1. Mariam Bacchus
    Students with dyslexia should create health coping mechanisms because they are at an increased risk for developing anxiety.

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    1. Please try and work on this further, the topic of anxiety and dyslexia is approved but the coping mechanism is research not controversial side of a topic. Therefore topic approved , thesis needs to be worked on further

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  2. James Kwarta
    Chronic Traumatic Encephalopathy or also known as CTE is a neurodegenerative disease associated with head trauma, even tho it was believed to affect only boxers, the at risk population has expanded to encompass a much wider demographic.

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    1. What are you proving here, need one side of a debate, topic approved, thesis need to be clarified for final paper.

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    2. can physical therapy treat cte?

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  3. James Fazio

    The education system does not prepare a student for the real world.

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    1. This is too broad, need to be more specific, topic of education system approved, what you are proving needs clarification

      Delete
    2. Mariam Bacchus
      You could narrow it down to a specific grade level.

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    3. It's very interesting topic and I do agree with you topic

      Delete
  4. David Lettal: While police brutalities does occur in New York, it mostly happens in black neighborhoods, or to black people

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    1. Wording and how you are stating this thesis needs to be redone, suggest more research or seeing the writing center to reword your thesis and be more specific . approved topic

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  5. Donato Zarro
    Working for long hours on top of working for weeks to months on end is not healthy and could bring down your life expectancy especially if you work a more stressful job so more days off are needed in more stressful jobs.

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    1. Working more than 40 hours awake will decrease your life expectancy.....you need to work on rewording your thesis to set up what you are actual proving. The above is not true just using as an example. Topic approved thesis not

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  6. Saurabh Subash Chand
    The voting age should be lowered to sixteen since youth are profoundly affected by Government choices, and they are willing and dependable enough to take on this important civic duty.

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    1. go over grammar in you thesis. Approved

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    2. Mariam Bacchus
      This is interesting. I recently thought the voting age should be lowered to seventeen.

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  7. Mikayla Henderson

    The education system is no longer about adequately educating students, it’s about gaining access to more funds for faculty members, and there needs to be a change.

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    1. This is confusing, need to clarify your wording, however the topic of money in education is a good one....keep working on this. Thesis redo, topic approved

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  8. David Hong
    It should be forbidden for dogs to be used for cruel experiments

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    1. Redo thesis wording , be specific in your wording, but approve

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    2. interesting topic, be a little more specific.

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    3. The topic is interesting!!

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  9. Ponelarajan Elavarasan

    The role of women in film Supporting the men,
    An analysis of how culture influences the changing discourse on gender representations in films

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    1. That is not a side of a controversial issue, this is just a thesis for a research paper. I love the topic, but you need to come up with a thesis that supports what you are actually proving. Topic approved, thesis needs to be reworked

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  10. Redo thesis wording , be specific in your wording, but approved

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  11. The death penalty should be abolished because it violates human rights

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    1. This is on the assignment sheet and in class we went over this is a do not do topic,
      I cannot give you credit for this anyway since there is no name on it and it is not approved. Choose a topic per the assignment
      specifications

      Delete
  12. Akshith Ramesh

    Contemplating the number of low-income families who cannot afford higher education, public colleges should offer free tuition.

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    1. topic approved
      all US public college for all?

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    2. Not for all. May be, just for students from a lower financial background.

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  13. Due to the American dream that everyone knows of, America has been labeled the land of opportunity, but for most people that is just a mere myth.

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    1. Way to broad and bias, you need to come up with a workable narrow thesis and what you are proving in it. Please redo, not approved at this point although I did give you credit for it.

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  14. Chandra Swaroop Reddy

    Listening to hard rock, upbeat pop music while exercising boosts weight loss

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    1. Need to be more specific, use science to help you here.
      Topic approved, thesis needs to be clarified after research

      Delete
  15. Joanna Cuenca
    Plant based diet leads to a better mechanism to maintain a healthy lifestyle and prevent from getting diseases that effect the individual long term. As this diet progesses perpetually new results alter the way plants are viewed as medicine to help sustain and balance a healthy body.

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  16. Ram Rakkappan
    Has religion influenced college admissions?

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    1. This s a question, please read directions that I went over at the beginning of class. Religion and college admissions in approved but what you are proving is unclear

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    2. The college admission shouldn't be given based on religion or cast basis.

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  17. Ponelarajan Elavarasan

    Restrictions and opportunites facing women entrepreneurs in developing countries.

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  18. Topic approved, thesis should be one statement as assigned and clarify your thesis, but topic approved. If you are saying getting diseases, this is way to broad, after research decide what you want to prove ( narrow it )

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  19. Dylan Perez
    Some may say that we could use old school techniques to live, but in reality, we would not be able to live without technology because everything we have and use is all done with the internet.

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  20. Way to broad and opinion . Please redo this thesis and send back for approval via email

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  21. Unrealistic beauty standards imposed by social media lead to poor body image among adolescents, triggering eating disorders, depression, low self-esteem, and suicidal thoughts.

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